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Hallucinations by *Grifmore:iconGrifmore:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


Afraid to die, afraid of pain
Propose the prose, Isolation
  Edge of the world,
Dreams like the dogs warning,
Humming the hymns in city
  Living the dream, living the dream
Living the life of no-life
Ever felt like we were dreaming?
Dreaming our reality away
   Burning the cigarette in our skin
    Enjoying the sun more than the moon

Feel like fragments of birth
Pieces of a puzzle, never a threat
   We do not understand the dream
The outsider told us to confront
To live and die, love and hate
To choose, and still we all chose
The dream
©2008-2009 *Grifmore
:icongrifmore:

Author's Comments

honestly, have you ever imagined, if life was a dream? Sometimes when I walk around in the part, everything feels so thick and unreal. Its kinda hard to explain, but just not real.
Ah well, the poem xD So I wrote some fucked up words, and now its a poem. I also wrote it because a friend of mine, made a poem, where life / dream was in one of the sentences, and it inspired me.

Anyway, enjoy and Cheers for watching!

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:iconmarchewkap:
Mood: Delighted ~marchewkap Jun 25, 2008, 4:40:00 AM
This reminds me of something that happend in my life. After that incident everything felt like a dream. I was standing on the side and watching myself living my life. It was very unreal. Although it was a very positive experience, I could see more colours than never before and after in my life. And your poem reminded me about this. Do you think when we close our eyes everything else disappears? :butterflytwo:

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>>> a dream that comes true is not a dream <<<
:icongrifmore:
*Grifmore Jun 25, 2008, 4:53:11 AM
Interesting story indeed. I'm not very spiritual, but this dream thing is strange. Of course, seeing "The Matrix" does not help at all, but what if we are just dreaming, or this whole world is in your head. Maybe we are just imagination?
Hmm... So I would say its good question, and I'm afraid I don't know the answer. But we can keep dreaming, that it someday will come to us, right? ;]

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When I feed the poor, they call me a saint.
When I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a communist.

- Dom Helder Camara, Archbishop of Recife, Brazil
:icontrixxblue:
~TriXxBLUE Jun 25, 2008, 9:13:36 AM
Mmm, nice! ^^~

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Don't call me stupid, my brain is just on standby.
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When I die, I want the Grim Reaper to come and pick me up with his Harley Davidson.
:icongrifmore:
*Grifmore Jun 25, 2008, 9:17:44 AM
Cheers mate ^.^

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When I feed the poor, they call me a saint.
When I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a communist.

- Dom Helder Camara, Archbishop of Recife, Brazil
:iconuber-bubble:
~uber-bubble Jun 26, 2008, 2:53:26 AM
i wrote one with this concept, and totally accept your superiority
whoa. very nice.

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Fear Kills Life
:icongrifmore:
*Grifmore Jun 26, 2008, 2:12:40 PM
Wow, uhm, could you give me a link to yours? I'm sure its just as good as mine ^__^ And thanks for your nice comment! Very appriciated ^___^

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When I feed the poor, they call me a saint.
When I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a communist.

- Dom Helder Camara, Archbishop of Recife, Brazil
:iconuber-bubble:
~uber-bubble Jun 27, 2008, 3:27:20 AM
[link]
not as succinct but more dual-consciousness i guess...

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Fear Kills Life
:icongrifmore:
*Grifmore Jul 5, 2008, 6:00:05 AM
I must say I love it O__o The whole rhetoric is amazing, and the description is much like mine ^.^

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When I feed the poor, they call me a saint.
When I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a communist.

- Dom Helder Camara, Archbishop of Recife, Brazil
:iconuber-bubble:
~uber-bubble Jul 6, 2008, 6:13:07 AM
no way. mine is yours' bitch

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Fear Kills Life
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